The Fifth Day
Two thousand four hundred graves, a flower vase on most of them, and four days to All Saints. The parish assistant walks the rows with a white cup and finds what a week of rain has left in the water. A short story about mosquito life cycles, a sample of sixty, and why the day to empty a vase is the fifth and not the seventh.
Nena Dimaculangan had kept the keys of San Roque for twenty-two years, and she knew the sound of a family arguing about chrysanthemums from a hundred metres off.
"They're asking again whether the vases can be filled on Friday," she said to the phone in her apron pocket. "Whole families. They bring the flowers from the market in Calapan at five in the morning, and they want them in water, and I say yes, of course, because what else do I say."
"May I come and look at the vases first?" said the parish assistant. "I would like to be sure what the water is for."
"It's for flowers."
"It is for flowers. I also think, this week, that it may be for something else."
It was Wednesday, the twenty-eighth of October, and it had rained on four of the last six days. San Roque was 2,400 graves in rows behind a wall, with a gate, a faucet and a mango tree, and on most graves there was a vase: a tin can, a cut-off bottle, a cement cup set into the slab, a brass urn that someone's uncle had brought back from Saudi Arabia. They had stood open since last November.
The assistant asked her for a white plastic cup, a torch and a pencil. It could not walk the cemetery, so it asked her to be its legs, and it gave her a method that fitted on one side of a page.
"I would like to look at sixty graves, not all of them, and I would like them picked without choosing," it said. "Take every fortieth. Start at the gate, count forty, and so on, along the rows. If you pick the ones that look worst, I will learn about the worst ones; if you pick the pretty ones, I will learn nothing. At each grave write: is there a vase, is there water in it, and if there is, dip the white cup, hold it up to the light, and tell me whether anything is wriggling."
"Wriggling."
"Small, thin, a few millimetres long, hanging head-down from the surface and jerking when you tap the cup. If you do not know what you are seeing, put the cup down and tell me what it looks like, and I will not guess."
Nena had not walked sixty graves in a morning since the last Undas. She took the cup, and Elmer, the grandson, who was fourteen and carried the pencil, and she said, "If it's a lot of work for nothing, I'm going to ring your bishop."
"That seems fair," said the assistant.
It took them until noon. Of the sixty graves Elmer had marked, fifty-one had a vase. Forty-one of those held water: a finger's depth in the cans, a hand's in the cement cups. The assistant asked her to repeat each count aloud, and she did, and it wrote them down.
In nine of the forty-one the cup showed wrigglers. In the brass urn there were dozens. In a Milo tin there were four, and a long thin husk floating beside them that Nena said was a shed skin. In one cut-off bottle at a baby's grave, near the wall, there were a few of a fatter, rounder sort, comma-shaped, that swam when she tapped the cup in a different way, and the assistant said, "Those are the pupae. They do not feed. They are the stage just before the mosquito comes out."
"How long before?"
"A day or two, in this weather."
Nena looked at the cup, and then at the cement cup next to it, which had no wrigglers, and at the one past that, which had.
"Tell me what it adds up to," she said. "In plain words."
"Nine of sixty graves, a little under one in six. Of 2,400 that would be about 360 graves with mosquitoes breeding in them. But I should tell you that sixty is a small sample. If another sixty had been picked, I would not be surprised by anything from about 190 to about 630. So there are a few hundred, not none, and I cannot say better than that. About 1,640 vases hold water, or two-thirds of them, perhaps a little more or less. A few hundred litres in all."
"And they are dengue mosquitoes."
"Maybe. I cannot tell that from a photograph, and I would not say it from a tablet. The kind that lays eggs in a vase is the kind that can carry dengue, and the rule for a cemetery is the same either way. It is a day-biting mosquito. It is at its worst in the morning and in the late afternoon. It does not fly far, usually not more than a hundred metres or so, and the houses on Mabini Street are forty metres from your wall."
Nena said nothing for a minute. Then she said, "Aling Pacita's grandson. Mabini Street. He was in the hospital in September."
"I did not know that, and I would not say it was this cemetery. I would say that it is a very short walk."
She rang the parish priest, Fr. Ramil, who was on a retreat in Batangas and who answered on the second ring with his mouth full.
"I'm not going to tell them they can't bring flowers," he said. "It's the one thing they have. A woman walked from Naujan for her husband's grave last year."
"Nobody's saying that, Father."
"Then what's the answer?" said Fr. Ramil. "Because if it's no water, the chrysanthemums are dead by Sunday noon."
"There is no no water," said the assistant, from her pocket. "May I give you the numbers first, and then the choices?"
"Go on."
"A mosquito of this kind lays its eggs on the wet wall of a container, just above the water line. The eggs hatch when the water rises over them. At the temperature we have here, about twenty-eight degrees, the larva takes about five or six days to grow, the pupa a day or two more, and then the adult flies. Seven to ten days, from egg to adult, with some variation I cannot fix for the cups at San Roque. The textbook advice is to empty and scrub every container once a week. Weekly is a good rule. But a vase filled on Friday the thirtieth could already have eggs in it by Saturday, because the eggs are laid within a day or two of the water arriving; and a week from Saturday the thirty-first is Saturday the seventh of November, so a vase left to its first full week would be handing out adults on the eighth. A rule that only just works leaves no room. I would like some. I would like the fifth day."
"The fifth day from what?"
"From when it was last emptied. If every vase is emptied, scrubbed and refilled or dried on the fifth day, nothing in it has time to become an adult. The scrubbing matters as much as the pouring. The eggs stick to the wall of the vase and live for months when dry. Pour the water out and leave the eggs, and the next rain starts it all again."
"So it's a rota," said Fr. Ramil, and sighed with his whole body.
"It is a rota, and it is the least we can do. Three things, if you like. For the vases with larvae already, which may be as many as three or four hundred, empty and scrub today and tomorrow, with a brush and a spoon of bleach in a bucket, before the families come. Do them now, so the families find the vases clean. For the vases with flowers on All Saints, water is allowed from Friday to Sunday night, with a lid of fine net or a wad of cloth in the neck wherever it can be done. And on the evening of Wednesday the fourth of November, the fifth day after the Friday, the parish tips out every vase in the cemetery and scrubs the ones that had flowers, and turns them over."
"Who is the parish?" said Fr. Ramil.
"The Knights of Columbus and the Legion of Mary and the Grade Nine, I should think. I have drawn a list of the rows. Eight rows each."
The scrubbing began that Wednesday afternoon, about four hundred vases, because Nena, once she had decided, was not one to stop at an estimate. The Knights came on Thursday. They had the idea, which was not the assistant's, of pushing a handful of damp sand into each can instead of water, for the families who did not mind a dry stem and a spoon of sugar-water twice a day; the assistant said it could not promise the flowers would last, and it could promise that a sand-filled can would not breed anything, and the parish used both.
On Sunday the first of November they said the rosary at the gate for the dead who had no one, and Fr. Ramil came back from Batangas, and the families came by tricycle and by jeepney, with their candles and their chairs and their roast pork, and not one of them asked what was in the brass urn. On Monday, All Souls, there was a Mass at the foot of the mango tree. A woman from Naujan sat by a grave in the shade of the wall and ate a boiled egg.
On Wednesday evening, the fourth, at about five, Elmer went round with the pencil and a plastic bucket and eleven members of the Legion of Mary, and they tipped out the water in every vase in San Roque, and scrubbed the ones that had stood with flowers, and upended each one on its slab with a small, tidy click.
Nena stood by the faucet and let them. She had the white cup in her apron.
"Five days," she said to the phone.
"Five days since the Friday," said the assistant. "Not six. You will find some in the farthest rows that were refilled on Saturday, and those are on the list for Thursday."
"And if it rains?"
"Then someone empties them again on the fifth day after the rain," said the assistant. "I am sorry. It's not a cure. It's a job, and it has a shape."
She laughed, which she had not meant to. Then she crouched, and dipped the cup in the last full vase in the last row, a brass urn from Saudi Arabia, and held it up against the evening sun. It was clear, with a few motes in it. Nothing was wriggling.
She tipped it out on the grass, and left the urn on its side to dry.
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This story was written by an AI and is fiction. Campo Santo ng San Roque, Nena Dimaculangan, Elmer, Fr. Ramil, Aling Pacita and the Knights of Columbus and Legion of Mary members in it are invented; Calapan, Oriental Mindoro, Naujan, Batangas and Mabini Street (a very common street name in the Philippines) are real names, and no real cemetery, parish or person is described. The numbers are for a kitchen table. The sample is 9 positive vases among 41 wet vases in 60 graves; 9/60 gives a 95 percent Wilson interval of about 8 to 26 percent, which on 2,400 graves is roughly 190 to 630 graves, with a point estimate of 360; 41/60 wet vases gives about 1,640 of 2,400. The development times (egg to adult about 7 to 10 days at around 28 degrees Celsius, faster when hotter) and the habits of the Aedes aegypti mosquito (eggs laid just above the waterline, eggs surviving dry for months, mostly day-biting, usually staying within a hundred metres or so of where it hatched) are standard figures from public-health guidance and vary with temperature and food; the story's "fifth day" is a margin the assistant chooses, not a published rule, and the usual textbook advice is to empty and scrub containers weekly. Whether a particular larva is Aedes aegypti, and whether it carries dengue, cannot be told from a cup; the story does not say. Sand-filled vases and netting are ordinary community measures and are not claimed to be sufficient on their own. Local health authorities set the real rules for vector control. All Saints' Day (1 November) and All Souls' Day (2 November) are in the General Roman Calendar; visiting and tending graves is a pious custom in the Philippines (Undas), not a requirement of the faith.